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j"1LAnZuoQdcKCkpDBKQMCgziGMoPC4VQUckMh<div class="post">Good revisions so far. <br/><br/>More suggestions:<br/><br/>1) How about mentioning bittorrent instead of hashcash?&nbsp; Bittorrent is a huge buzz word and could grab some attention.&nbsp; As a completely distributed and anonymous network, I'd say that Bitcoin is similar enough to justify the comparison.<br/><br/>2) "...clients burn CPU cycles..." --&gt; "...nodes burn CPU cycles..."<br/><br/>3)&nbsp; Throw in "decentralized" and "proof-of-work based" somewhere<br/><br/>4) Personally, I'm still not fully satisfied with the mention of energy-backing.&nbsp; Maybe you could replace it with something about the time-stamped transaction history being voted on / secured by the majority of CPU power?&nbsp; <br/><br/>5) Not to be a smartass, but watch out for passive voice (e.g. "It is expected that over time...").&nbsp; Headlines and news articles usually try to grab readers' attention by using the more exciting active voice.<br/><br/>Feel free to take all, none, or somewhere in between.&nbsp; We're critical because we care&nbsp; <img alt="Wink" border="0" src="/static/img/emoticons/wink.gif"/></div> text/html